Thanks, and I remain happy to be here.
On the writing and the scenes you cite...a story, *any* story, should be designed not just to take you through the mechanics of a plot, but to make you *feel* something. Those, for me, are the elements I look for when I watch something, and when I write something. If I'm not on the verge or tears in writing Kosh's fate, you won't be that way watching it.
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