Have not read Rice's "The Adding Machine" or seen it, but from the apparent time period, it's likely of the school of playwriting that has most influenced my work in general, mainly in terms of style.
I somewhat tend to moderate my writing style between the fairly straightforward and simple to slightly more theatrical in nature, more of the Serling/Chayefsky/Corwin mode. I like playing with language, and English is a terrific language to play with. There was a time in this country when literate syntactical construction was something honored; now everything tends to be more toward the y'know, I was, you know, hanging around the corner store, y'know, and Bob comes up to me, and he says....
If you look at the original Twilight Zone, some episodes of the original Star Trek, the Outer Limits...you see a kind of reflective writing that delights in slamming nouns and verbs together to see what kind of explosion you get when the syntax hits critical mass.
It saddens me a bit now that anybody who sounds too literate is often put down as showy or being theatrical. Listen to the speeches of Kennedy and Churchill and FDR, look to the great orators of our long history of a nation, from Lincoln to Jefferson. Their use of language, of an idea well formed and delivered, propelled this nation toward its current destiny, forged one country out of dozens of squabbling states. I listen now to politicians, hoping and waiting for the one who understands that the words have to dig into our souls and take root, must have power and the purity of language well-used. And I just don't hear it anymore...which is perhaps why we have consensus takers and not leaders these days.
It saddens me that literacy has become suspect, and degraded, given how many millions of years of evolution spent developing the ability to create language. The quality of our thoughts is bordered on all sides by our facility with language. The less precise the useage, the less clear the process of language, the less you can achieve what you want to achieve when you open you mouth to say something. We have slowly bastardized and degraded and weakened the language, abetted and abided by a growing cultural disdain for literacy, a cyclical trend toward anti-intellectualism.
So I write my characters as sharp, and as witty, and as intelligent, and as literate as I wish I would be under those sorts of circumstances, which of course I never am. Maybe to remind people of the power of language...mainly because I just love the sound of words carefully stitched together. My dramatic conceit is that in 2259, we have had a moderate rebirth of formality, and the kind of literacy you would often see in letters from the turn of the century, and the 1930s. Because it allows me to write it the way I want.
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